Emily, lots of great discovery here. Wonderful pictures and descriptions. Some of your entries have dates from the trail and some don't. Without each having a date, I have trouble deciding which week to pay you for. Before I do, you need to go back to the calendars or your books and find dates to put at the top of each entry. Also, when you check your entries, make sure you don't sound like an encyclopedia (as you do in the entry on hair.) So . . . date these . . . check them for language that makes them sound like you are there ("supposed to look like" doesn't ring to real) . . . and tell me when I should get out my paycheck.
I'm 12 years old and I was born in Sheffield, England. I have a puppy, a cat, and a fish and I live with my parents and sister. My other sister is graduating this year from Berkely and I miss her very much. :(
great picture
ReplyDeletei like all the picture but mayB u should tell us what they r, and like the history behind them
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love all you picturesa. So amazing!
ReplyDeleteEmily, lots of great discovery here. Wonderful pictures and descriptions. Some of your entries have dates from the trail and some don't. Without each having a date, I have trouble deciding which week to pay you for. Before I do, you need to go back to the calendars or your books and find dates to put at the top of each entry. Also, when you check your entries, make sure you don't sound like an encyclopedia (as you do in the entry on hair.) So . . . date these . . . check them for language that makes them sound like you are there ("supposed to look like" doesn't ring to real) . . . and tell me when I should get out my paycheck.
ReplyDeletewill do, johnny
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